December 26, 2005

hello

when the phone rang
i picked it up and said
hello.

is your mom in?
the voice on the other
end of the line
asked in chinese

no they've gone to malaysia,
i said, talking to the phone.

fiddling with the coiled
wire connection, i wondered
to whom that voice belonged.
a salesperson maybe.
or my mom's colleague. or one of
those distant relatives i meet
once a year.

is this royce?
it asked. yes, i replied
less at ease now
that she knew who i was
but i didn't she.

they'll be back tomorrow night.
i said.
oh okay. i'll call back
tomorrow then. thank you.

and i heard a click
on the other end of the line
and the regular monotone
that said good bye.

2 Comments:

At December 30, 2005 10:41 am, Blogger GK said...

Umm. Didn't work for me. Kept expecting something, something, to show up .... then suddenly the poem ended. And that was that.

 
At December 31, 2005 11:22 pm, Blogger royce said...

hmm thanks for comments :D didnt expect someone not from school reading this blog. haha. anyway, yeah i kinda had that same feeling too. that the later half of the poem was swept past too quickly. ah well i'll have to spend time reworking it then.

 

Post a Comment

<< Home