Haiku?

From the bus window
The grey world sways to and fro -
Oh! How nauseous!

/i really don't know... my second haiku ever anyway... don't think i'll submit for the haiku comp in the first place... oh dear... is 'nauseous' 2 or 3 syllables? how foolish i am...

(3rd edit: man how many times have i edited this post. Just confirmed that 'nauseous' can be both 2 and 3 syllables, i take it to be 3. Also read that there must be two largely speparated parts in a haiku, so i added the originally intended dash. Apparently the japs also believe there must always be a 'season' word - a word in the haiku that indicates a season (e.g. cherry blossom, green frog, etc). I mean, like what in the world? We only have hot-summer and wet-summer here. So the word "grey" can be the latter. Or to make the 'summer' season more obvious, how about "hot" or "dry" instead? They both sound good - what do you two think?)