The Unknown Woods/Realm/Lands/Wadeva

The airy trees revive their show
As faerie leaves alight with glow
These wooded folk arise from snow
With hooded cloak they dance, they know

This secret cause to why they live -
The sacred flaws of men won't give:
Their hidden homes are never sought
Nor bidden gnomes entice a thought

For men pale at dark, deep woods [or: For/All men pale at darkened woods]
With pen'd tales that do no good [or: And pen'd tales do them no good]
Where mortal men fear to step
Immortal land will fear no threat

/amazing how long i could sustain a triple rhyme or whatever whatnot you call it. it seems to me that the first few lines are more steady and flow nicely, but towards the end it gets quite laborous... bah bad speeling anyway. the first two lines of the last stanza/verse/wadeva really seem like a tongue twister... i suppose its cos of the 'men pale' conflicting with 'pen'd tales' - the sound of the 'p' is switched from 2nd word to 1st...

and seems lik everyone else is too busy to post... speaking of busy... i should be sleeping now... bah. bl00dy wasting my time...