an ubin eagle
it was a stormy afternoon one day
[that] i saw a bellied eagle -
black shape upon a sky so grey
t'was the soaring regal
"where go'est thou, dear feathered friend?"
i asked the misty wind
"what do'st thou in day so dark
that stirs your feathered kin'[d]?"
[as spray dash'd acros't the rocking boat,
he set on hanging branch
and swung great wings to keep afloat
'gainst the mighty *wind
yet amidst the sweeping, whisp'ring gale
the eagle watched in silence
as clouds rained noise and watered hail
said he nothing 'til mine absence
and hence he took to outstretched wing
and flew away on waves that sing]
/i saw a couple sea eagles on the bumboat to ubin for the dreaded and now over npcc atc. black things soaring in the distance. poor things, cos the weather was really very unpleasant...this actually wasn't the original poem that came to me, i think it was lost in the three days of boredom and sleep-deprivation... not really very happy with it... esp. the latter 3 stanzas or are they verses (?) whatever they are anyway.. would someone like to help me compose another ending? or continue the poem from after the second verse?
4 Comments:
Your poem really captures the eagle's majesty. Thank you for sharing it.
I've added a link to your poem from the focus ubin website
http://www.focusubin.org/
Wow, thanks a lot Ria. The poem isn't really all that great, really.. Wonder how you stumbled across this poem though!
Together with a few others who love Ubin wild and unspoilt, I'm trying to bring together work and thoughts about ubin on the focus ubin website.
There's so many of us, moved individually by ubin.
Together, our work can bring more people to learn about and love ubin. This is a small step towards keeping ubin as the last unspoilt island in Singapore.
I search every day for blog entries about ubin to post to the website. There's this handy site www.technorati.com that is like a google for blogs. Just search 'ubin' and all blog entries with the word appears. There are many entries about ubin every day.
But most are not as elegant as yours!
Ah, I see. Pretty cool site that! I'm also glad to see there are a number of people who are really dedicated to conserving Ubin. Good stuff!
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