the man with the bomb
the man with bomb
does not scream
nononono
like those who died would
if they knew
the man with the bomb
whispers
great is my god
posted by Josh @ 11/30/2005 11:08:00 pm
3 comments
sitting in a taxi
Always be a poet, even in prose. ~Charles Baudelaire
November 30, 2005
does not scream
nononono
like those who died would
if they knew
the man with the bomb
whispers
great is my god
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3 Comments:
I think this has the makings of a great poem.
thank you gilbert (or do we call you mr koh?)! it's very heartening to hear a comment like that from such an established poet :)
but the problem at hand is that although the poem has the potential, i simply haven't the ideas to finish it!
Seciously, this poem is great. Blew me away. (Yes, great but sensitive)
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