Rainy Afternoon

Alone
And it is dark
The rain jumps upon the balcony
And upon the windows it goes

----------plit
----------------------plat

----------split
----------------------splat


Ah finally. a post to end the deadness of the blog. i also think its the best one i've done for some time now. lately i've been trying to force my poems out from two lines, and it didn't work out well. so i felt this one was more natural. Even though i had originally started with the first two lines, when i'm thinking of an experience and translating it into imagery, i guess it's slightly easier for me. annoyingly, i still had trouble choosing the word to describe the rain. at first it was 'splatters', then 'platters', 'clatters' and now 'jumps'. but it still doesn't sound right. anyway, i changed the template. ew >_O".