hoho
the quest for beauty
leads many on wayward paths
stumbling down rocky trails
that wind everywhere but to
coveted desires
and
many are snatched away
to be made by sharp teeth
and sweet smelling mist,
left to stumble onwards
with taunt skin
the truly beautiful
are those who glide with ease
backwards
forwards
sidewards
often stopping to wander away
caring not for sacred paths
to walk on soft grasses
and smell beautiful
flowers
/ arrrr if ya don't practice anything, you lose what you once had - goes for sports, poetry and things the world over and over and over :(
1 Comments:
hmm i like the subject matter of your piece :) but i thought the second stanza was a little clumsy. even so, the image in the last stanza was really impactful. jiayou! i heard cap deadline is april 2nd. not really sure though, but that means u'd have alot more time to write!
royce
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